DORA WANG'S SOCIAL STUDIES FEEDBACK

FIRST ARTICLE

• Text is too close to the divider/borders

• Navigation Bar should be at the top

• Body text could’ve been distributed better to make the text more appealing to read (ex. bullet points)

• Background colour and text has good contrast

 

SECOND ARTICLE

• Some blank spaces around the text

• Text can be distributed more evenly to lessen the blank space and create more balance.

• unbalanced design (night side is a lot more blank compared to the left side)

• The divider on the right bottom side isn’t fully closed

 

THIRD ARTICLE

• Blank spaces around the headers and photo area

• The border/divider isn’t evenly lined up

• Too much text in one cell

• Not a lot of visual hiarchy

• A lot of blank space in the bottom middle

 

FOURTH ARTICLE

• Body text is too crowded, can be broken up

• Left bottom side the text isn’t in the divider

• dividers aren’t lined up evenly

• Blank space around the photos and key concepts header part

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PROS

• Organized layout ( page is divided into sections

• Good use of headings

• Relevant visuals

• Informative context

• Consistent theme

• Balanced colour pallete

• Good contrast between text and background color

 

CONS

Body text can be broken up more

Uneven balance certain sides take up more space than the other

• Not a lot of visual hiarchy to make it more appealing

• Navigation bar styling

• Visual flow (highlighted sections or dividers could help

• Good extras: between text and background colour

• Colour is a bit dull since the colour pallet is only grey and blue